This is probably one of the weirder stories iv'e read in a while. that i found oddly satisfying

7575003 I regret nothing.

7575003 7575006 I regret everything.

7575006 i.imgflip.com/1aubcv.jpg

7575066 As I said in the notes... I regret nothing.

As soon as i saw the words "vore" and "unbirthing".....I don't fucking know.....

7575230 ah but there isn't any death or... liquidation... I wanted to try a softer version. Not into the hardcore death stuff.

7575239 I know that but still.........*shiver*......

7575242 Eh, just trying something different.

7575250 Its cool dude XD

7575250 Lets just say, when it comes to vore.......I've seen some shit.....

7575328 As have I, one does not wander the internet and come out sane.

7575331 You said it dude!

Odd story, but I liked it, in a weird way. Read this while thinking of another story that involves something like this.

7575423 Oh? Darn, and here I thought I was the first to think of this for alicorn ascension...

Kind of. Celestias Relaxing Vacation is the story that involves this, except it's used to kill everyone.

The alicorn ascension thing is original, but the unbirthing and birthing is used.

7575456 Oh that... yeah I saw that and the description was like.

Mine is so much tamer in comparison.

7575458 I know the unbirthing and birth is common. I meant in the method I used it.

7575466 yes the way you use it is original.

Huh.....wasnt as bad as i thought it was gonna be

7577904 As I said, more tame than most.

7577912 Thats....a half agreeable statement

I adore the concept you've got here, but the writing itself could use some work. you've got some bad run on sentences and the story overall just feels a bit too frantic.

still enjoyed despite all of that, however! If you ever get the urge to write any other vorish smut, or even the sequel to this, I'd be happy to proofread for you~

7579989 Hmmm thanks. This was just an experiment for me really, but sure.

7575239 Thank *Insert religion* My wish has been granted!

"YES! FILL US UP, SISTER!" Luna yells

Thumbs up.

Wait, so does this mean that when Shining Armor ascends, he'll become a mare since there are only female alicorns?

Better than Magical Mystery Cure. 10/10 would weird boner again.

thus is how

I think you wanted to use "this"

4/5 Me Gustas

"How do you think she'll feel when it is her brother's turn to ascend?" she asks her.
Celestia giggles and kisses Twilight just above her horn. "Oh, I'm sure she'll be eager to help him when the time comes,"

Oh dear god

7617210 the alicorns in this fic have both male and female bits. :P

I came into this rubbing my hands and chuckling madly. I walked out rubbing my temples and mumbling with insanity.