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7552110 Hi. And somehow I missed that. Whoops. Double meaning!
Wow. somehow this is actually taking off. And I just noticed the likes are perfectly balanced at 8:20 9/11/16 so I'm quite happy. Balance! and there might be a reason for the capitalization of Package.
Cute little story, might want to try adding some spaces between paragraphs, and checking up on your punctuation (never hurts to google punctuation questions).
7555282 Thanks. Why do I always have trouble with format? Format is evil.
7555311 I highly suggest a good word-processor like LibreOffice, or lacking that even Google Docs. The former is my preference, it allows fine customization of paragraph style and even allows for things like LanguageTool to be installed (an amazingly good grammar checker).
7555405 Cool. Thanks.
Any suggestions on the thing will be appreciated!