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Wind of the Skies
Just a Pony who wants to write about other Ponies
Wind of the Skies
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7552110 Hi. And somehow I missed that. Whoops. Double meaning!
Wow. somehow this is actually taking off. And I just noticed the likes are perfectly balanced at 8:20 9/11/16 so I'm quite happy. Balance! and there might be a reason for the capitalization of Package.
Cute little story, might want to try adding some spaces between paragraphs, and checking up on your punctuation (never hurts to google punctuation questions).
7555282 Thanks. Why do I always have trouble with format? Format is evil.
7555311 I highly suggest a good word-processor like LibreOffice, or lacking that even Google Docs. The former is my preference, it allows fine customization of paragraph style and even allows for things like LanguageTool to be installed (an amazingly good grammar checker).
7555405 Cool. Thanks.
Any suggestions on the thing will be appreciated!
What's a ponu?
7867634 my personal misspelling of pony. I like it too much to not acknowledge it when it happens
7869231 The book is trying it's best to help it's pony. so the other pony does not mind so long as she isn't effected. plus it's not a mind control spell as it simply engenders fondness at a advanced rate.so basically it's helping her make friends . bookhorse's mind has been bound to the book's will. this is why she doesn't mind being changed like she was. if you came across a magical book it would more than likely rip through your mind from the lack of defences.
Lastly I am offended by your complaining of how I speak, act, and think. very offended and hurt. now give me cookies
(I know there isn't much personality in the character but when you're in shock you don't really have much personality. )
She will freak out later on. and she speaks like that so she can get her points across.
7869485 about the editor i'll see what I can do. and uhhm I was being sarcastic about my feelings being hurt. so I am sorry. <sarcasm>Should I have used my sarcasms tags?</sarcasm>
I am glad you are enjoying it however. and I humbly thank you for your advice
the book is my favourite part though. it's just kind of chilling, making sure it's offspring does well
Seriously though, thank you for the advice. it is appreciated