My fetish...

It has been triggered...

7542948 I'm happy to have pulled the fetish trigger!

Sir, I am into MANY of these kinks...but then you put Harshwhinny in the story. Dude, that's like (fetish)^fetish. I feel like my dick will explode halfway through this if your other stories are any indication. Gonna have to read later for now.

I am into all of this and more, and I'm even more stoked that there's gonna be more! but man, that ending was way darker than I was expecting.

7542973 Let me know what you think when you do read it! :)

7542980 I've already had some discussions with the client about the future of the series. :) This definitely will be harder and rougher than something like Celestia's Stable.

Welp. My fetish was hit. I'm horny.

Keep up the fantasitc work...My god this dark was hot....

Kinks Include: EVERYTHING I LOVE

Welp, this is going to be good.

I'll preface this by saying that I can't really immerse myself in the fantasy, stuff like this (sanz futa horsecock) happens multiple times a year where I live, so it got too real for me to be objective.

Even that said, I think this went just a little too far and had just a few too many unrealistic pieces to it. I know, horsecock and rape-preg is a fantasy for some people, but combine them with the more realistic EQG world compared to Equestria and it kind of breaks down. I know some people are cool with non-con, no matter what, but at least for me and plenty of others, it has to stay a fantasy. It was hard to be immersed when you have: human futa horsedick, hypnotizing dick smell, and apparently a world in which it's okay for a teacher to knock up a student (since Harshwhinny isn't worried whatsoever, I'm assuming this is the case).

That said, your descriptions are still on point, and I think if you're someone that fetishizes all of these things completely at face value, I imagine you'll quite enjoy it.

Personally, I couldn't get past the fact that if AJ and her family were anything like my family, the second they found out what happened Mrs. Harshwhinny would have to run to live in a new country or be turned into a woman again. With a saw.

Another DraceDomino story? Yuss pls, more cocks and ball worship!

7543372 I'll be the first to admit this sort of story isn't for everyone, and it's pretty depraved even by my usual standards. I absolutely respect anyone's opinion if this just isn't their thing; everyone has their things that they can engross themselves in, and things that hurt the illusion and enjoyment. And after all, we're all here to have fun reading stories, after all.

Thank you for being respectful in your comment, too, I appreciate that. :) And I hope you'll find other stories I put through in the future more to your tastes!

I want to like this I really do! But unfortunately I have an issue with cheating on your significant other. I believe that this has the potential to be a good story and I apologize if you think I'm being mean but this isn't my cup of tea. Best of luck

7543444 I don't think it's being mean at all. :) Have you tried my story Principal Celestia's Stable? It has a lot of similar elements, but there's no cheating involved.

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I actually have that on my tracking list, I do enjoy that story though I haven't reviewed it just yet.

You know, I've always wondered why no one wrote something like this before. I don't mean exactly like this but a clop story of Harshwhinny and Dash with one or the other being a futa.

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I want to get into this so badly, but the cheating aspect kills my erection, GODDAMN ERECTION KILLER

Holy God I thought I could handle this. I mean netorare in general is a kink of mine but this.... I'm sorry man I just can't. Nothing against you or your work but I really am not down with this type of netorare. Though too be fair that Celestia story you have vaguely follows the same plotline without all the cheating. This is just a little too hardcore for me and I've played all Taimanin Asagi games, but I digress keep your work but this is one story I'm skipping out on.

Holy shit i Don't know what to say

I'm there with almost all the kinks here. Like, the cheating aspect isn't that big of a deal to me as it seems to be others. My iffy spot is the rimming. If I can skip over that and the rest is p. good, I'll be good with this fic. Looking forward to giving it a read.

7544481 I'd say it's pretty easily skippable. It's announced when it's coming up, and doesn't take up a huge portion of the story.

7544104 C'mon man, this reaction is exactly why I emphasized for people to read the tags. There's no surprises, you knew cheating was gonna be a part going into it.

7544521 Alright, awesome. BRRT achieved.

I feel guilty for liking this story...but I'll get over it ;)

7544522 Yeah, I kinda just saw you had a new thing and was like wooooo, still good.

7544664 I felt guilty for writing it, but to be fair if I wasn't already going to hell, this wasn't the thing that would push me over.

I want to like this story, I really do, it sure hits a lot of my fetishes. But the Rainbow cheating aspect, along with mind-control adiction to the musk is killing it for me. I however realize that this is a comission, so nothing to be done about that.

I just hope that the end result in mind by the comissioner isn't a disastrously broken AppleDash relationship, and her being nothing but an addicted slave.

7545684 now that you've said it, I can't imagine it would end any other way.

while a bit darker than i usually like my clop, it's pretty good. Not a fan of the cheating stuff, but gonna fave for futawhinny

Again right in the fetishes.

Where the hell do you come from man, it's been a while since I saw a high quality EqG writer doing it right in the fetish like that. Reminds me of /mlp/'s greens.

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"Abandon all hope ye who enter here," or something like that. ;3

Hit everything on the head. The cheating makes it even better. No rainbow on this apple farm lol.

Is this fic done, or is there going to be future chapters?

Can you do more chapters please

7550917 There's more coming. It's a commissioned work, and I'll be adding new chapters as the client hires me for them. I'm working on Chapter 2 next week, actually.

7587678 Are you going to have Applejack join Ms. Harshwhinny's ever growing harem?

7587954 Not sure. :) That's up to the client! I could definitely see it happening, though.

7588076 I'm really happy that this client requested this story, because this is hot as hell.

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Dayum mrs.harshwhinny...that was harsh as fuck XD you really gonna do dashie and Aj like that? Shit if rainbow got punished I shudder to think what kinda punishment pinkie or Sunset would get given sunset used to be a bitch and Pinkie is pinkie lol good story

like others said i think the end was too dark but only for the 1st ch, would had like it if ms.harsh was a little nicer at the end by not cuming in her and give her back her drink not without have a sip 1st but the essay was a good idea. It will make dash relive that moment over and over as she wright well a clopfic slowly making her want her. and the next ch would have mis harsh punishing her for not "paying attention" and keep finding things to punish her for. and form there it could get more and more dark but thats the only thing I wrong the pacing at the end.

That was awesome

this had me like:
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Glad you liked it! More is in the works.