It’s a cloudy day over a swampy wasteland, and stationed there is a rundown juvenile holding facility, with a skeleton in a hoodie behind jail bars with writing saying “Rest in Peace”. Inside a cell is Deadshot who is punching a makeshift punching bag.
“Floyd, chow time!” “Step up to the door.” the guard says
“Don't! Call me Floyd”
“I can call you whatever I want Floyd” he gave Deadshot his dinner
“What’s for dinner?”
“The same as always, loaf just like mom use to make
“With toenails, rat shit. Everything a grown boy like you needs.”
“Come here, can I tell you a secret”
“Yeah”
“When I get out of here, I'm going to hunt you down, until I find and bury you. ” the guard laughed.
“You just threatened a staff member”
“Yeah?”
“Yeah you did”
“What? Are you going to do something? Go ahead hall monitor! Do something.”
“Lets have some fun.” Floyd was then taken to the punishment room, and was surrounded by guards and he was forced to sit in a chair, he kicks two guards away, but one guard repeatedly hits him in the gut. Deadshots’ screams of pain are heard all over the facility.
In another cell hanging in a cage is Harley Quinn, with white hair that has pink and blue coloring on the ends. “Open the gate, don’t waste my time. Sector C, look alive boss is on deck, Hold! She moves stun her alright. Are gonna come down from there or what?” She giggles and comes down.
“You know the rules hotness, you got to keep off these bars.”
“What, these bars?”
Harley licks the bars (Oh my gosh this is one messed up chick.) He thought, they start laughing “You are really insane in the membraine.”
“You wanna come in here and tell me that, no you don't have the balls.”
“You sleep on the ground or else .” he threatens
“I sleep where I want, when I want, with who I want” the guard laughs
“ Alpha one, shock her” Harley gets so shocked that she is flung back with force. She is then taken to a room to be fed her lunch. She is next seen, strapped to a chair with a hose in her nose.
"Lets see what got here for lunch, we got strawberry, chocolate, or vanilla. Why don't we take a photo for an occasion? Something to remember the good times we have together" the guard take a picture of her. After that she is thrown back in the cell, she gets up and rams the bars screaming, only to fall back down “It's a shame really, you could have been a lovely young woman, now tour just a clowns whore.” The guards leave and Harley is left crying, she can't help but wonder one thing.
"Where is my puddin."
Outside in the court is a container like cell, inside a tan skin colored boy, bald with black tattoos of skulls and flames all over his body. He sits and watches a little flame girl dance he smiles, but sighs missing his mother. He closes his hand blowing it out and everything becomes dark inside. "Hey ese, here's your burrito man enjoy."
Inside a dark underground cell covered in skeletons of pigs, cows, deer. A bulky, bald figure with green scales for skin, and sharp teeth was doing push ups growling. Outside guards were coming, because it was lunch time, “K.C! Dinner time” a guard looks through night vision goggles “Where are you at, show yourself.” Croc walks up, and they drop his food down, leaving all they can here is crocs loud eating.
In another cell a pink skinned teen with orange messy hair, and beard not covering his chin. Captain Boomerang is yelling and screaming at every/anything to let him out. “Hey! Let me out already! Lady ya got ta help me I'm begging you seriously, come on already. Let me out!” the female guard closes the opening, waiting for someone to takeover so her shift can be over.
In the main office, their are monitors watching all the prisoners while the guard looking at a magazine.
Uhhhh... I don't think this even counts as fan fiction. You took dialogue directly from the movie. I'm sorry but I'll be downvoting this.
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Thank you for your thoughts, but hope you continue reading this story. Because this is a lot more to this then dialogue.
The description alone is a jumbled mess; I can only imagine what the story is like.
PS. You don't need a human tag if you have the EG tag.
I'm new at this so please cut me some slack.
7545101
New or not, you shouldn't be stealing lines directly from something else. If nothing else it shows you don't have the creativity nessecary to write an engaging story. Your second chapter is pretty much ripped directly from the movie
Dude, show some creativity.
I've read a lot of fics with dialogue from movies and shows. I didn't steal anything this is what I visioned for my story. It is just the beginning just wait till more chapters come.
If no one has anything nice to say then don't post anything at all.
Thank you.
7546221
Yeah, how about no?
Writing isn't about positive feel goody whatever. No matter how good of a writer you are there is always room for improvement.
Always
If you restrict yourself to nothing but positive reviews you are doing yourself a disfavor.
Inb4 this is taken down due to plagiarism and you're possibly banned
Just in case
Guys please. Stop attackong her please. She's new at this and has passed this idea by me. She has some awesome ideas in store. If you don't like it don't read or. Don't go attackong Her because you have a problem withe he story. It's pretty clear she didn't exactly copy or the story never would have past.
Stop being cruel. I think this follows with both movies pretty well