Denial, Anger, Bargaining, Depression and Acceptance. Air Raid was currently going through these five stages of grief. Although, if she was brutally honest with herself, she was having a very hard time getting past the fourth.
you're a fantastic writer. You definitely know how to express your characters' emotions in a way that can be felt by your readers. Very good story. I look very much forward to reading your next chapter.
>E-Bay If there's one thing that consistently annoys me, it's lame real-world references like that. Could you not have at least called it E-Hay?
Writing is fine, solid mechanics and you punctuate dialogue correctly, which feels all too rare in the padded pony niche. Rather dry, though, lacks punch and presence in terms of style. Overall, you're better than the majority of writers here, but I'm afraid the story doesn't really grab me.
Great as always. Can't wait for next chapter.
you're a fantastic writer. You definitely know how to express your characters' emotions in a way that can be felt by your readers. Very good story. I look very much forward to reading your next chapter.
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I've just started work on Chapter 3 - Bargaining. It should be ready by mid month
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If there's one thing that consistently annoys me, it's lame real-world references like that. Could you not have at least called it E-Hay?
Writing is fine, solid mechanics and you punctuate dialogue correctly, which feels all too rare in the padded pony niche. Rather dry, though, lacks punch and presence in terms of style. Overall, you're better than the majority of writers here, but I'm afraid the story doesn't really grab me.
Throne, the feels!