Transgender isn't really my taste/preference, so I'll put this in the "Maybe read" pile.

I'm glad that the clop was optional. I'll probably go back and read it, but I'm glad you gave the option.

As for the story itself, I loved it. It was adorable, serious, and delved into a lot of what I was most curious about when it came to the lore of the Clocktower Society. Well done, and good luck with the next story you write

7533161 I thought the same thing too, but the clop isn't fully needed and the story alone is amazing and worth it.

Is it cool if I add this to the "Transgender Bronies" group if it isn't already?

Cadence only giggled at her student’s earnestness. “You can always use the Changeling fire kiln at the transformation center and keep up the magic with potions for eleven months. A lot of ponies at Clocktower Equestria West do that. It just takes a lot of patience and perseverance.” Cadence said. “What amazes me most is that the public still buys into the whole ‘magic of love’ thing.”

I smell winningverse.

I love how good this story is! I've read it several times over the years, and it's really quite something! This time I'm back again because I've managed to snag myself a lovely lady like Rara and I shared this story with her. Also, now that I've played the game, I totally see the bioshock references in the chapter. Well done.