Every thing about me is wrong. From my DNA to my Mind. Its not my fault. I never asked to be made. To my family and friends i am me. But to the world, I am an Abomination, a Monster... A Hybrid
7483508 This story, this story is very good it reminds me of my favorite book, the book that got me into reading in the first place 'Maximum Ride' it have to same basic concept, the main characters are on the run from those that created them because those that created them also want to harm them.
Im interested in seeing how you develop the story. Keep up your good work.
7476029
Thank you!
Lots of spellies! I think the chapter title means trauma?
7476030
Awesome start! Kinda reminds me of Elfin Lied.
As your editor, I am here to inform you Editor is spelled Editor, not editer.
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You just explained why i need an editer
Great first chapter I hope you continue the story
That was good, you have me interested you should continue this when you can.
7483508
This story, this story is very good it reminds me of my favorite book, the book that got me into reading in the first place 'Maximum Ride' it have to same basic concept, the main characters are on the run from those that created them because those that created them also want to harm them.
7499316
cool
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so i take it that you like it
7514400 yes indeedie