I enjoy this but I might go back and read this chapter again to see if I can find anything you need to fix other then that it's a good story can't wait for the next chapter
If anyone is wondering why I haven't been updating my story in a while its because I really don't know where to go at the moment. I will still continue the story I just have to plan it ahead a bit because with the first two I just winged it. So I am taking time to prepare and all that so I can actually update weekly.
I enjoy this but I might go back and read this chapter again to see if I can find anything you need to fix other then that it's a good story can't wait for the next chapter
good job
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If anyone is wondering why I haven't been updating my story in a while its because I really don't know where to go at the moment. I will still continue the story I just have to plan it ahead a bit because with the first two I just winged it. So I am taking time to prepare and all that so I can actually update weekly.