Pinkamena: The Game is a novelization of the PC/Android game "Pinkamena". Join Captain Silvermane in his quest to save the sleepy borough of Little Hoofington from horrors that go bump in the night - can you find the killer before it's too late?
IWAS RIGHT THE FIRST TIME! I FRIGGING KNEW IT! YOU WERE THROWING ME OFF! HOLY SH*T. wait a copycat? Eh, whatever I guess it wasn't going to be EXACTLY like the game.
9261504 Don't worry about it. I advised folks in the story description to abstain from the comments until they read a certain way in, but it might not be all that big a deal to some.
As for the copycat killer thing, I admit that from the start I expected it would make some folks feel cheated. But i stuck with it because I felt it was an interesting plot twist, and that it fit decently in the setting.
That was absolute genius. Thank you so much for writing this. This is now officially my favourite story I have read on fimfiction. You have told it so well and set up everything along the way. That's the carnal rule of horror: you have to set up the twist. I found this story because I had entertained the thought of writing a story based off the game. I don't need to now. This is so much better than what i could have written. This is absolute perfection.
I WAS RIGHT THE FIRST TIME! I FRIGGING KNEW IT! YOU WERE THROWING ME OFF! HOLY SH*T. wait a copycat? Eh, whatever I guess it wasn't going to be EXACTLY like the game.
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Of course I was. You don't expect me to just give it away, now do you?
That's about all that's left at this point, cat and mouse!
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Oh jeez my bad. hopefully fixed it before it was too late. I would be mad if it weren't for how well you pulled it off
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Don't worry about it. I advised folks in the story description to abstain from the comments until they read a certain way in, but it might not be all that big a deal to some.
As for the copycat killer thing, I admit that from the start I expected it would make some folks feel cheated. But i stuck with it because I felt it was an interesting plot twist, and that it fit decently in the setting.
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It was definitely a surprise. I'm impressed really, Not many writers can tell a story this well. *claps*
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Aw gee, thanks
That was absolute genius. Thank you so much for writing this.
This is now officially my favourite story I have read on fimfiction. You have told it so well and set up everything along the way. That's the carnal rule of horror: you have to set up the twist.
I found this story because I had entertained the thought of writing a story based off the game. I don't need to now. This is so much better than what i could have written. This is absolute perfection.