Can Shadow Eclipse overcome the feelings she has for this mare, more so since this mare is not only royalty, but one of her own sister's that she stayed in hiding to avoid all the prissy nobles or will she give in and do the taboo of incest?
This chapter is perfect nothing is wrong with it I love how you write it brings out the creativity of the story keep up a good work update more on this story soon. I wounder who twilight is going to meet hmm .I can't wait to see what celestia and luna react to eclipse I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work update more soon.
7440087 I don't really care about the likes or dislikes, just the comments about the story. Such as hints at errors, misspelled words, incorrect word to word structure or double words next to each other, even punctuation errors.
This chapter is perfect nothing is wrong with it I love how you write it brings out the creativity of the story keep up a good work update more on this story soon. I wounder who twilight is going to meet hmm .I can't wait to see what celestia and luna react to eclipse I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work update more soon.
7440087 I don't really care about the likes or dislikes, just the comments about the story. Such as hints at errors, misspelled words, incorrect word to word structure or double words next to each other, even punctuation errors.