Douche-bag has gone through many adventures, including being abducted and probed by aliens. But he isn't ready for his next adventure...as a pony
Huzzah! And again I say huzzah. There is a little bit of a few grammar mistakes but nothing too bad. Also someone can't get that they're banished in space and time...again.
7249637 glad you thinks its good. yeah one of the reasons i do these stories is to practice my grammer XD
7249867 what?
7249640 that is a good way to go about it. Try reading stuff out loud to yourself, that can sometimes work.
This is Getting good also Dragonshout
7249927 I wanted to use cup-a-spell but im not sure how it would look XD
7251286 Would probably involve using his tail once he learns how to control it like AJ or Pinkie.
Huzzah! And again I say huzzah. There is a little bit of a few grammar mistakes but nothing too bad. Also someone can't get that they're banished in space and time...again.
7249637 glad you thinks its good. yeah one of the reasons i do these stories is to practice my grammer XD
7249867 what?
7249640 that is a good way to go about it. Try reading stuff out loud to yourself, that can sometimes work.
This is Getting good also Dragonshout
7249927 I wanted to use cup-a-spell but im not sure how it would look XD
7251286 Would probably involve using his tail once he learns how to control it like AJ or Pinkie.