7261128 It was good. It was a kind of brief intermission to introduce the main six. The mental image you're painting is very vivid and well done. You missed a few words here and there but those can easily be corrected by a visual scan. This story is a good one that's keeping a good pace. The lengths of chapters could be a bit longer but that's because I eagerly await what's happening next.
7261505 the reason the chapters are a bit short is because i find i tend to ramble if i go for to long. The word thing is because of my crappy keyboard things been damaged for a while
7262221 Indeed it is XD oh no there is no herd with these four mares. They want him all for themselves. Can you guess them all? PM me with the right answers and win a prize
Nice! Still that one pony...is Applejack gonna be a part of Clyde's warriors?
7261091 You'll see. There is still one more to be introduce
7261105 I look forward to it.
7261126 newest chapter? what did you think?
7261128 It was good. It was a kind of brief intermission to introduce the main six. The mental image you're painting is very vivid and well done. You missed a few words here and there but those can easily be corrected by a visual scan. This story is a good one that's keeping a good pace. The lengths of chapters could be a bit longer but that's because I eagerly await what's happening next.
7261505 the reason the chapters are a bit short is because i find i tend to ramble if i go for to long.
The word thing is because of my crappy keyboard things been damaged for a while
The game is afoot. Seems clyde is on the move, wonder what will come of it in the future?
7261657 You'll have to wait and see my friend
7261515 it's fine, man. It's a lot better than the problems some stories face.
7261710 indeed. I did toy with the idea of rainbw dash joining clyde but well it didt seem to work
7261717 well, she is Loyalty
7262179 Wait til you see the love interests in douche-Bag XD
7262180 now you just being a tease to readers.
7262192 Well I hope the four interests will be a surpirse
7262200 four you say?
7262208 Three have already been revealed
the fourth still hasnt shown her great face yet
7262210 is her face also powerful also, now I'm getting a herding feeling.
7262221 Indeed it is XD
oh no there is no herd with these four mares. They want him all for themselves. Can you guess them all? PM me with the right answers and win a prize
7262227 Challenge was accepted