I Love the story, I have been following this story since chapter 1 and since saddle up sunset. Now don't get me wrong the storyline is beautiful, but i feel like there is more meat on the bone, although I maybe completely wrong and their might be another story in the works. Thats just my opinion and it doesn't have to be taken seriously.
Well this is an expected turn of events. Sunshine gets so desperate to stay in the human world she pretends her bully is her boyfriend and even kisses him to prove it. And on top of that he's the son of the cop who tried to pry the secret of the Equestrian portal from Applejack. Now it all makes sense why Dennis hated Sunshine so much in the beginning, his dad has a beef with Applejack and in term her family and he passed that prejudice onto his son.
Are there just random chapters removed? I don't remember Dennis getting blasted in the chest, i there wasn't any scene of Sunshine and her horse friend getting it on.
9486930 This story has seen major changes for continuity reasons. Yes, some parts were removed or replaced by new chapters like Dance Magic. This is the final draft now and should not see anymore big changes except for the occasional grammatical/spelling tweak. I hope you continue to read and enjoy my works.
I Love the story, I have been following this story since chapter 1 and since saddle up sunset. Now don't get me wrong the storyline is beautiful, but i feel like there is more meat on the bone, although I maybe completely wrong and their might be another story in the works. Thats just my opinion and it doesn't have to be taken seriously.
stopping
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You might have called it for now on this one but I think there could be more of this story easily! And it would be greatly welcomed.
i hope for a sequel to this story
Not gonna lie...could be waaayy more to this but its still awesome
Joe always came off as a little too friendly to Sunset. I thought he had a crush on her for a sec.
Well this is an expected turn of events. Sunshine gets so desperate to stay in the human world she pretends her bully is her boyfriend and even kisses him to prove it. And on top of that he's the son of the cop who tried to pry the secret of the Equestrian portal from Applejack. Now it all makes sense why Dennis hated Sunshine so much in the beginning, his dad has a beef with Applejack and in term her family and he passed that prejudice onto his son.
Are there just random chapters removed?
I don't remember Dennis getting blasted in the chest, i there wasn't any scene of Sunshine and her horse friend getting it on.
9486930
This story has seen major changes for continuity reasons. Yes, some parts were removed or replaced by new chapters like Dance Magic. This is the final draft now and should not see anymore big changes except for the occasional grammatical/spelling tweak. I hope you continue to read and enjoy my works.