I slowly and calmly walked up to her"Hello there. My name is Nick Fitzgerald" I said calmly and a little slower than I usually do to try to keep her from getting frightened and it worked but she did not say anything. "Are you OK? What is your name?" I asked speaking in the same way as before Then her lips moved but little if any sound came out. "Hey are you alright...I didn't quite hear you." I said. The cycle went a few more times with slight changes in wording each time until we (Twi. joined as well) gave up.
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I slowly and calmly walked up to her"Hello there. My name is Nick Fitzgerald" I said calmly and a little slower than I usually do to try to keep her from getting frightened and it worked but she did not say anything. "Are you OK? What is your name?" I asked speaking in the same way as before Then her lips moved but little if any sound came out. "Hey are you alright...I didn't quite hear you." I said. The cycle went a few more times with slight changes in wording each time until we (Twi. joined as well) gave up.
Something is missing here.
I am enjoying this so far yet it seems a tad bit rushed.
It needs more detailed Describing and give to the characters more personality