Second chances
written by Aqua_Breeze
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Hmm, nice start, through you've let some errors through. Like towards instead of towers, dropping 'make' from 'make me feel'. And, now that I think about it, you tend to shift tenses randomly.
Still, I like it, a lot. Great start. Also, simmer down, Sunbutt!
That awkward moment when you have an angry sun alicorn in your face.
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