Donovan Riggs suddenly appears in Equestria, and he's not too keen on staying there once he realizes it's not just some dream. Join him as he finds out more about these ponies while trying to find a way back to Earth.
7218918 well it looks nice enough, and maybe I end up liking it whatever may happens, I just don't enjoy certain types of stereotypes. (yes I think that is what I meant)
Only to be sure you didn't understood it wrong, I wasn'T affraid of anything sex related in this story, but sometimes I'm not sure if it is only because of the language, or if there is a real romance in there too.
I don't mind waiting, but if you do some sort of herd romance, I hope you actually built up a connection between the Ponys and him, since I always have a hard time to believe that four or five Ponys would just want to share the main Char.
“Bucking sweet, brah.” Vinyl said with a nod of her head, her two-toned mane shaking loosely. They spoke about the details for a bit, and before long, Donovan found himself thoroughly enjoying this party. Once Vinyl ended the conversation, claiming she had to get back to her turntables before her playlist ended, Donovan looked around Sugarcube corner with a thought he hadn’t had before, his smirk turning into a grin as Pinkie and Rainbow Dash waved to him from across the room.
That he actually worked as a bouncer, was a bit to much of an coincidence for me even if it was his first job he admitted doing.
Well just a bit to many Humans that actually suddenly are exactly finding that type of work that they are able to do, and not having to learn it.
Okay not sure how much I like it later, but till now it looks good enough, I can't really understand all the downvotes till now, but I wait a bit longer before I vote for this story.
Nice progress ....
Oh ...wait ...
where dafuq is Lyra ! ? !
7147953 Lyra is... somewhere.
Since I believe the sex tag is also involving the romance tag, I would like to know if you plan either a herd, or a normal relationship.
To be honest till now I usually only liked storys with 3 or 4 Ponys at most, and nearly all of them where my favourites.
7215722 That's a secret. You'll have to wait and see. But I wouldn't worry too much, let's just say the sex tag isn't only tied with the romance tag
7218918 well it looks nice enough, and maybe I end up liking it whatever may happens, I just don't enjoy certain types of stereotypes. (yes I think that is what I meant)
Only to be sure you didn't understood it wrong, I wasn'T affraid of anything sex related in this story, but sometimes I'm not sure if it is only because of the language, or if there is a real romance in there too.
I don't mind waiting, but if you do some sort of herd romance, I hope you actually built up a connection between the Ponys and him, since I always have a hard time to believe that four or five Ponys would just want to share the main Char.
That he actually worked as a bouncer, was a bit to much of an coincidence for me even if it was his first job he admitted doing.
Well just a bit to many Humans that actually suddenly are exactly finding that type of work that they are able to do, and not having to learn it.
Okay not sure how much I like it later, but till now it looks good enough, I can't really understand all the downvotes till now, but I wait a bit longer before I vote for this story.
I would like to have a new chapter please.