I only have one problem with this chapter my friend [this is personal taste mind you so don't feel bad] I would prefer a rehash of chapter 1 with trixy asking question every few word or even a reaction to the IOM at large for interesting reaction that could bring a whole lot of character development to both of them. like where you think the black dragons come from or how a trixy would deal with being a unnoticeable dot in the grand scheme of things. it could be quite the humbling. [for anyone ] or our dragon friend learning about equestria from trixy. but other wise good chapter my friend!

7116265 oh, Craner, you know your critism is always welcomed! You actually TRY to help..... As for what you're suggesting? *nudge nudge* what do you think I'm planning for Chapter Threeeee? Along with the discovery of a little wanted poster, with a certain dragon's handsome mug on it.

7116297 always looking to help!

7116369 I know you are, brother xD

I like this. Keep it up

Damn.... During that fight I was like.... KILL THEM ALL!

Please tell me the next chapter is being written I need more

7364724 As are many others xD you think these ideas come very easy to me?????

Moar please

Well, if I ever reread this chapter I am skipping the part about Trixie's mother. I lost my mother two years ago and it still hurts.