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I only have one problem with this chapter my friend [this is personal taste mind you so don't feel bad] I would prefer a rehash of chapter 1 with trixy asking question every few word or even a reaction to the IOM at large for interesting reaction that could bring a whole lot of character development to both of them. like where you think the black dragons come from or how a trixy would deal with being a unnoticeable dot in the grand scheme of things. it could be quite the humbling. [for anyone ] or our dragon friend learning about equestria from trixy. but other wise good chapter my friend!
7116265 oh, Craner, you know your critism is always welcomed! You actually TRY to help..... As for what you're suggesting? *nudge nudge* what do you think I'm planning for Chapter Threeeee? Along with the discovery of a little wanted poster, with a certain dragon's handsome mug on it.
7116297 always looking to help!
7116369 I know you are, brother xD
I like this. Keep it up
Damn.... During that fight I was like.... KILL THEM ALL!
Please tell me the next chapter is being written I need more
7364724 As are many others xD you think these ideas come very easy to me?????
Moar please
good.good those bastards deserves nothing less.
Mess with a Black Dragon, you get the blades!
I love this. More I say! More!
7611844 I agree those people deserve nothing more then death (in my opinion a slow and painful death)
7612730 normally I would say put them to the torch but some people get sensitive about that....
7613008 hahahaha I'll get the stake ready you get the torches
honestly so fucking confusing I don't know what any of this is I can't read this story
7618711 What's confusing about it?
Well, if I ever reread this chapter I am skipping the part about Trixie's mother. I lost my mother two years ago and it still hurts.
good....good....
7615575 and the hp potions so he lasts longer for the punesment ........ where am I agen I frergot .... oh a mine trutl boom
Very well done friend can't wait for more chapters
I absolutely enjoy reading your stories. I eagerly await more to this Story and the one with Wolfhowl. I hope that you keep on writing.
Great! A story about the Black Dragons! I was waiting for one! Thank you fellow servant of the God Emperor for giving us this gift!
I like them but I don't like how you abandon them.
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Like I said before, it isn’t abandoned. I’m TRYING to get time to write, but do not have much. I currently have a time cue of which stories are being updated first.
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Yeah I didn't get to that other message before writing this I'm afraid.
Pls updoot, i have a knife
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And I have a feels cannon *snaps fingers and makes howitzer appear* I will when I have time, don’t worry.
MORE!
Update ????
Hope you continue the storm