I'm curious about the rather broken structuring of the sentences (sudden line breaks in mid-sentence); it made this chapter somewhat difficult to read. Is the structuring intentional, or is it just an error that occurred during the editing process?
7319733 Nevermind, saw what you meant. No idea how that happened!
Thanks for bringing it to my attention, should be all fixed now. And also thanks, glad you're enjoying it! Glad to know some people are getting something out of it at least.
I'm curious about the rather broken structuring of the sentences (sudden line breaks in mid-sentence); it made this chapter somewhat difficult to read. Is the structuring intentional, or is it just an error that occurred during the editing process?
Also, I'm really enjoying this story so far.
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Line breaks mid-sentence? I'll have to look into that, sounds like a formatting error. If possible, could you point out where you saw them?
7319733 Nevermind, saw what you meant. No idea how that happened!
Thanks for bringing it to my attention, should be all fixed now. And also thanks, glad you're enjoying it! Glad to know some people are getting something out of it at least.