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During her wings restoration, I kept thinking about phoenixes.
Was this planned?
7345177 not as such, but like a phoenix she is renewed now, at least physically
7345244 Once again another wonderful chapter to another amazing book keep it up
7366374 it wasn't intended to be but if that's what you think then power to you
7381632 thank you!! what about chapter 8 did you like, specifically?
Her wings may be healed... but she'll need more than those to survive a world of darkness...
Really? ...Really?
Oxford comma that first word; in fact, use Oxford commas everywhere, they're a wonderful invention.
Also, on ellipsis (...). You have over a hundred forty of them in this chapter, whereas most full length books don't even have that many in their entirety! Almost all of which were double attached when they should only be attached singly. (i.e. when you have 'X...Y' the ellipsis should be attached to 'X... Y' to trail the word off, then begin the Y, or 'X ...Y' to initiate the Y as rising above the X or coming after the X. If both apply, attach it to the back, so that it trails off into the start of the next word.