I'm not important, just the guy who helps others with monster problems and criminal problems. Usually I wouldn't give a rats ass but hey, it's my home and I'm Shade.
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Well that just happened.
6986290 Is that a good thing?
6986418 Don't know, need to wait for the next chapter :P
6986661 I see what you did there.
6986672 Hehe
6986751 but what do you think so far? And what do you think will happen?
6986775 I think we're going to see more of Shade's demonic magic.
Lol and you said it would be funny it was sad that all i didn't Lough not even once
but still good
Filled with errors and sudden children of Twilight's..... but passable. Maybe a bit more with the little arc created with Scootaloo and a bit more of the evidence that made Shade go from "Fuck you you random women" to "Fuck you for leaving me mom!"
6987372 I'll be honest, I've tried making a scene where Shade sees all of Celestia's memories during her stay at the human world but couldn't, it always came out shit. So really, I know it doesn't seem good but I'm not trying to wow anyone, just entertain those who actually enjoy what I write.
So yeah, I do this not just because I can, I write for the fun of it and I like to entertain.
Though you bringing that up made me think if I could try and make the memories, if i do, I'm sure it'll be shit.
Rushed a bit this chapter, but still good. I don't think I'm getting my fluttershy romance, am I?
6987491
Maybe you do, but maybe not. If you can't get the memory scenes right than maybe have the two talk more about it in later chapters. If you couldn't write them right those kinds of things for things are a bit like shits for stories: If you force it too hard you are just gonna hurt yourself.
6988273 Thanks for the advice.
Your pacing is far too fast. You need to slow the hell down.
https://youtu.be/fCe2bTtKCJg
How would you even see it happening they're ninjas and can disappear
Oh god
Anything but this
I thibk it should be heard not read