That was a really interesting idea, I really liked it, but I feel that there's still quite a lot you could do with the story. Some things were brought up but never answered (for example, what was behind that small headache that Rainbow got? Was she trying to fight the power of the collar or something?) and some things could be explored deeper. I hope that's not the last we see of this concept
6909464 The headache is due to Rainbow trying to remember what exactly happens under the collar's influence, her duties and such and coming up short due to the collar's effects. As for continuation, while I could in theory, I am doubtful I will. I ended it where I did because I believed that's where it ended naturally, and another chapter would purely be to just show off more porn, and not the characters thoughts and such, or to show off the scenario past fucking customers.
6910624 Humans are perverts. Male, female, young, old. The few that are not either suffer from a medical condition, or have been conditioned to be otherwise (generally from a young age by some sicko trying to fuck with said person's mind to fit their own misguided ideals).
That cover art....
It fills me with...
DETERMINATION
Holy shit.
What is with all the porn stories lately?
Hmm, interesting potential, short payoff.
6908449 Just what's been inspiring me, though this one was inspired by an image.
I'd love for this to get a sequel or more chapters detailing more of their duties to guests as Calm's slaves
That was a really interesting idea, I really liked it, but I feel that there's still quite a lot you could do with the story. Some things were brought up but never answered (for example, what was behind that small headache that Rainbow got? Was she trying to fight the power of the collar or something?) and some things could be explored deeper. I hope that's not the last we see of this concept
6909464 The headache is due to Rainbow trying to remember what exactly happens under the collar's influence, her duties and such and coming up short due to the collar's effects. As for continuation, while I could in theory, I am doubtful I will. I ended it where I did because I believed that's where it ended naturally, and another chapter would purely be to just show off more porn, and not the characters thoughts and such, or to show off the scenario past fucking customers.
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Almost 3:1 upvote to downvote ratio. Feature box. Oh yea, so much universal hate.
6910624 Well, on the plus side, at least that means I get to prove your name right.
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Humans are perverts.
Male, female, young, old.
The few that are not either suffer from a medical condition, or have been conditioned to be otherwise (generally from a young age by some sicko trying to fuck with said person's mind to fit their own misguided ideals).
It was shamazingly awesome. Would their be a prequel or something, say for example Rainbow's first time working there?
6915467 There isn't, sorry. I may consider it sometime, but doing the extended mind control stuff... I dunno.
6915601 Oh okay
Fun little story, my only criticism is that you used the word "bosom" a few too many times.
I can just imagine his business expanding further. Muhahahahaaaaa!