It always falls a little flat for me in fics, when the Equestrians behave cruelly to their prisoners. Why would Canterlot's dungeon be this grim, dank, ill-lit place, etc. It always feels out of character.
Still an enjoyable story, though! Third time's the charm?
7665707 Headcanon: Sadri was accidentally locked in the wrong dungeon - Cadence's sex dungeon. Also it's kind of the point of dungeons that they serve to "scare 'em straight".
So, this story...I liked it. I like the concept, I liked that you created an original threat.
I don't like how quickly it was over. It took Sadri a few days to control Twilight...and an hour with the other Princesses. Other than Celestia briefly, we never really got a look into her methods, or her motivations, or even her true personality. I still have no idea how Luna wound up controlled, since it happened behind closed doors.
It's a good story, and you had a good setup, leaving the reader wanting, slowly unveiling more...and then it just never came.
Any chance of a bad ending? I always feel stories like these need one.
Annnnnd now I feel bad for Sadie. Less so for Cadence.
It always falls a little flat for me in fics, when the Equestrians behave cruelly to their prisoners. Why would Canterlot's dungeon be this grim, dank, ill-lit place, etc. It always feels out of character.
Still an enjoyable story, though! Third time's the charm?
7665707 Headcanon: Sadri was accidentally locked in the wrong dungeon - Cadence's sex dungeon. Also it's kind of the point of dungeons that they serve to "scare 'em straight".
7657810 Yeah, but it becomes evident really early on that the rest of it is decidedly not even remotely related to that Firefly episode.
7667064 I generally imagine them, being the fluffy-lovey sorts that they are, to be big on rehabilitative justice vs. punishment justice.
So, this story...I liked it. I like the concept, I liked that you created an original threat.
I don't like how quickly it was over. It took Sadri a few days to control Twilight...and an hour with the other Princesses. Other than Celestia briefly, we never really got a look into her methods, or her motivations, or even her true personality. I still have no idea how Luna wound up controlled, since it happened behind closed doors.
It's a good story, and you had a good setup, leaving the reader wanting, slowly unveiling more...and then it just never came.
Ah, the ending has finally come. An interesting ride. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.