Branching out with other characters? Good thinking. Very cute and sweet.
Pinkie felt a bit... uncharacteristically normal and not her usual wacky self, but it's actually an interesting depiction. Pinkie does put on a clowny mask most of the time, but from time to time she's let us know that there's a real pony beneath, and this worked well with that thinking. After all, who would she relax and lower her guard with but the person she's just shared one of the most deeply personal and loving acts you can have?
That was just very sweet and very loving! I just don't have the words to how wonderful you made this seem; warm and safe after sharing so intimate a time together...very enjoyable! I can't wait to see more.
I love this so very much. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Here, have my daw.
This...I will be sure to keep an eye on.
This is cute, good job.
Very Very Very Cute.... A little sappy.... With a tiny bit of cheesiness... But you made it work... Good job Lady Rarity.
Branching out with other characters? Good thinking. Very cute and sweet.
Pinkie felt a bit... uncharacteristically normal and not her usual wacky self, but it's actually an interesting depiction. Pinkie does put on a clowny mask most of the time, but from time to time she's let us know that there's a real pony beneath, and this worked well with that thinking. After all, who would she relax and lower her guard with but the person she's just shared one of the most deeply personal and loving acts you can have?
If only Pinkie was my waifu.
Aside from that, this was still a very sweet chapter. Good on you for doing this.
CRAP, I'M OUT OF D'AWWWs! HALP!
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Well, yeah, she's not hyper and bouncy because all that energy got used up in other activities. ;)
I hope you will continue this for all 6, mane 6 mares.
Keep up the good work
6856943 thats the idea :D
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WE LIKE THIS!!!
The amount of telly adverbs in this story is excruciating. Otherwise it's a fun diversion. I liked it.
That was just very sweet and very loving! I just don't have the words to how wonderful you made this seem; warm and safe after sharing so intimate a time together...very enjoyable! I can't wait to see more.
Daaaaaaw, loving this to the extreme! :D
Ohohoh... I see who's next... and methinks I will be very happy reading it, nice job!