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I actually laughed at the cliche list though

And one shots are actually a bit tricky for me. I'm not good with having one small idea to make a short story. As soon as I think with my non-creative and unoriginal brain, I want to continue making the story go on and on until eventually, I find the end. Again, I am not original with creating anything, pony, creature, or locale. Besides, it's just a fic I had going through my head one day, I decided to type it out in the crappiest way possible, and say "DONE!" once it's finished. If I posted the first draft, then you have permission to berate me and say I suck.

Thanks for the advice, and I will take it to heart, if only I do have some idea for a one shot...That's gonna be tough though.

Wait until the rest of the chapters are released, and you can hate it if it sucks. Even I hate my own work sometimes, and I write for fun.

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I know, crappy name, but it's what I had going when I first wrote this a couple years ago out of boredom. I did get some feedback from someone before making an account and posting this story when I finished it, and that person wasn't a fan of MLP. She said she liked it.

I have also never played, or heard of, Pony Island.

Also, have you seen other fics with pony names they make up? Some of them are outrageous, and I'm not as creative with names as others might be. I have a hard time trying to make an account name for other sites since they're always taken by someone else.

As long as you like the story so far, then . If not, oh well. Can't win them all

I'm still liking this. Screw clichés, this is still pretty good.

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Thank you, Thunder Quill. Glad you're enjoying it so far.

DAMN YOU LUCIFER!