You may wanna switch the rating to mature due to the latest chapter.

9157068 Changed it so it won't be deleted.

Okay so after reading the first chapter i have to say the writing is very stilted and discord is completely ooc discord isnt a coward hell he could turn that mist into chocolate hell he stands the best chance against her and could turn her into anything roseblood feels like a villain that exists for no reason but to make spike look good i love spike more than the main six but this is ridiculous

9162067 It's your honest opinion

I had to go back and re-read this story, and I wonder if she would slowly corrupt Spike by using both Lust and Greed on him after this? It would be great if Roseblood would make him grow a bit as she is corrupting him. Which in turn once he is big enough, she could ride him as a mode of lazy transportation (he could be like a walking chair warmer). It would definitely hurt the rebels morale knowing that Spike is being corrupted and it would probably cause them to make some really bad choices.