FINALLY! Some non-grimdark MacBloom goodness! Thank you.

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There's a few of them. Heck I see two or three of them in the Similar section to the right of the fic.

My Body Is Ready.

This chapter was hot and it reminded me of your previous fic with Scootaloo, so she'd probably be sympathetic to AB and Big Mac's plight.

Big Mac x CMC coming up I guess.

Apple Bloom.

That is all, I came neither to praise nor rebuke, but consider doing a find/replace all. It's her name, it's important.

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Done and done. I've seen both variants of the name and wasn't exactly sure which one would be preferred.

6813543 That's because people regularly get it wrong. It's easy to see why, Applejack, after all. But when in doubt, check the character tags on Fimfiction, which in turn come from sources like Hasbro's website. That works for mane characters, at least.

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What? You don't write it out as Applebloom? Next you're going to tell me it's not Bigmacintosh or Rainbowdash. It's loony, I tell you!

6816425 Be nice. The author was confused because of other people being systematically wrong. It's not like they were willfully wrong. I've actually interacted with other authors who think a canon name has optional spellings. i.imgur.com/REXzM.png

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That was less for the author and more a bit of playful sarcasm directed at you for the correction. Personally, I'm quite fine with either spelling. As long as I know who's being referenced, everything's hunky-dory.

6816673 So Sweetiebell and Scooter Loo work fine too? Names are correct or not (Except for Princess Cadenzaadanceadence, she's got issues).

Edit: In case it's not apparent, this is my attempt at playful as well. Most of my comments are intended that way.

6813054 And the next one has to be Sweetie Belle...And who? Rarity? Or her father?

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Thank Princesscelestia I'm not the only one who still uses Cadence!

Then Maccy pulled Scootaloo over and fucked her raw.

The end.

6840192 Doesn't give a FUCK about the incest. Porn logic!

7148726 yup