7530387 My first reaction was to look for what you had meant by that, as I had not included saying that this was a slow burn story in this version. However, nonetheless, slow burn pretty much just means that while you know the end result, the trip to get to that point in the corruption and such is, well, slow, They have five different days to go through as the candies do their jobs. Which yes, means I have a LOT of chapters to do for this.
Hmm...maybe just stick with one cover art, composited from the entire image series? Maybe featuring the 60% bimbofied version (semi-safe) of each girl? Just a suggestion.
Also, literally the first words in the description are "A slow burn ... story", so I'm not sure what you meant by "as I had not included saying that this was a slow burn story in this version.".
7530576 Part of the issue there is that the change is so gradual, so even if it didn't grow her clothes, she would probably notice them being tight first. On the other hand, this is the small upgrade stage. We'll see how well the clothes keep up with the rest. I do need to fill 6 chapter events for each character afterall.
7530593 Hmm... If you haven't planned it out yet, I just had an idea for what could be left in Pinkie's note.
Miss Pie, You are always such an energetic and bouncy party girl, it's amazing you never collapse in exhaustion. Always wanting others to smile. As a bit of a thank you, I've left you these, which will surely give you a smile. Have one a day for five days, and I guarantee it will add an extra bounce to your step, and open your mind to all new party ideas that your friends are sure to love.
7530621 It's not bad, but each girl, to varying levels of solidity (such as Sunset is low, while Rarity is higher), have a set story arc in my mind, and, surprisingly enough, Pinkie is one of the MOST solid, and something as vague as that I don't think would work. Sorry!
7530797 A simple way to put it is that it's a less extreme version of bimbofication. While the girls may become inclined more and more to sex, they'll never become the dim wit, cock hungry, cookie cutter objects that bimbos normally are. They're allowed to keep what makes them them.
Upvoted for slow burn, Tracked for caution. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Wonder what Discord's up to in general here (you can't tell me it's not him) and... this is post RR, pre FG, right? So no Sci-Twi? If either version of Purple Smart is showing up, you should probably update your description to seven girls instead of six.
Also: I'd be amused if the other side of the mirror was way more relaxed about sex and Sunset's just formed bad habits to the contrary, so the candy's not so much relaxing her inhibitions as it is reminding her of how she was back home. And Principal Celestia brings it up to Princess Twilight when she shows, and Twilight just can't understand what the problem is.
I do hope that the previous comments by the author are true, and that sexy doesn't have to mean brain dead. Losing the essential elements of these characters for a cheap thrill isn't worth it in my opinion.
7530387 My first reaction was to look for what you had meant by that, as I had not included saying that this was a slow burn story in this version. However, nonetheless, slow burn pretty much just means that while you know the end result, the trip to get to that point in the corruption and such is, well, slow, They have five different days to go through as the candies do their jobs. Which yes, means I have a LOT of chapters to do for this.
Hmm...maybe just stick with one cover art, composited from the entire image series? Maybe featuring the 60% bimbofied version (semi-safe) of each girl? Just a suggestion.
7530399 Ah, like that...
Also, literally the first words in the description are "A slow burn ... story", so I'm not sure what you meant by "as I had not included saying that this was a slow burn story in this version.".
7530411 Whoops! I made the description a long while ago, so that is my mistake for forgetting that that was in there.
Today has been a weird day for me.
7530576 Part of the issue there is that the change is so gradual, so even if it didn't grow her clothes, she would probably notice them being tight first. On the other hand, this is the small upgrade stage. We'll see how well the clothes keep up with the rest. I do need to fill 6 chapter events for each character afterall.
7530593
Hmm...
If you haven't planned it out yet, I just had an idea for what could be left in Pinkie's note.
How's that?
7530621 It's not bad, but each girl, to varying levels of solidity (such as Sunset is low, while Rarity is higher), have a set story arc in my mind, and, surprisingly enough, Pinkie is one of the MOST solid, and something as vague as that I don't think would work. Sorry!
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It's alright. Just glad you liked it.
What is sluttification?
7530797 A simple way to put it is that it's a less extreme version of bimbofication. While the girls may become inclined more and more to sex, they'll never become the dim wit, cock hungry, cookie cutter objects that bimbos normally are. They're allowed to keep what makes them them.
The whole thing is just ruined by Sunset in my opinion.
Upvoted for slow burn, Tracked for caution. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Wonder what Discord's up to in general here (you can't tell me it's not him) and... this is post RR, pre FG, right? So no Sci-Twi? If either version of Purple Smart is showing up, you should probably update your description to seven girls instead of six.
Also: I'd be amused if the other side of the mirror was way more relaxed about sex and Sunset's just formed bad habits to the contrary, so the candy's not so much relaxing her inhibitions as it is reminding her of how she was back home. And Principal Celestia brings it up to Princess Twilight when she shows, and Twilight just can't understand what the problem is.
I do hope that the previous comments by the author are true, and that sexy doesn't have to mean brain dead. Losing the essential elements of these characters for a cheap thrill isn't worth it in my opinion.