I like the thoughts they both take on things, its nice to seem some thinking being used hahah.

Also, might just want to check over some of the sentences.

Spike nodded and next to Rarity. His eyes quickly drifted back towards Rarity’s body and stared at it.

I guess you meant sat next to rarity? its just missing in the story.

Hm. So far so good. Spotted a few grammar mistakes but I like this story. It's sweet and sexy. It's... Swexy.

This is a good story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is surprisingly well-written for a clopfic. A nice amount of world-building, plenty of detail on things other than sex, and it's actually taken a chapter to do all this.

Spike is still a few years than me though.

I think you're missing a "younger" here

That is all. Equestria is ours.

6654670 Eeyup.

It's gonna be hotness. Also,

She turned around and was shocked and confused to see the dragon had her back turned towards her and was inching himself towards the door.

Spike bit his lower lip and his hands were shaking more violently than ever. For a brief moment, he could have sworn Rarity’s butt was shaking at him in temptation.

She probably was shaking her butt at you.

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*Gasp!* No! Do you think so??? (Sorry, I couldn’t resist. )

Don't know if it's been done before but an alternitive could have had Rarity waiting in her room with the necklace on and nothing else