With war looming over Equestria and the fate of the world more or less in my hands, can I hold it together and sucessfully manage work, love and war? Hell if I know...
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While it was a nice chapter, I can't help but think about why there is a trend of Equestria being always the butt of the joke when it comes to espionage and internal affairs.
It seems that anyone can just walk into the castle (or anywhere in Equestria) and just have their way without any single pony noticing, fighting back or basically doing anything about it. Other popular version is when no one noticed the clear traitor and no one tracked suspicious activities from important political figures that just move assets across the country like lint in their pockets.
I mean there is supposed to be guards near the princesses and a squad of fully armed enemies just waltzed their way inside. I know ponies are supposed to be peaceful and anyone has their own headcanons but... Maybe I'm looking much into it and this was just the last case after a long string of similar situations.
Just my two cents. Carry on with the good work.
6840389 You have a point. Let me make an edit, might help the case. Give the griffons a more aggressive entry perhaps?
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Just had a vision of Soren and Gilda walking out of the griffon parliament. Building on fire and exploding sporradicaly. Gilda collapses whispering "so much blood"
Captain is just whistling and cleaning his gear of blood when the equestrians come and stare, slack jawed.
Captain says.
"So what's my next target?'
Don't fuck with Cappy
6840576 :P Yeah I could see that too if I didn't have other plans.
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Be cool to see what they are in 3.
2.
1.
Plus however many seconds until its published.
6840780 Probably not till tonight or tomorrow, depending on if I can get the words flowing again.
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awesome