With war looming over Equestria and the fate of the world more or less in my hands, can I hold it together and sucessfully manage work, love and war? Hell if I know...
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I like your angle!
Luna's sudden shift in character feels very off. I think this story needs more explanations and a bit more thought into it.
6764536 I think the big issue was the staff stepping in and ruining the flow the author was going for. I guess a giant blue alicorn, and two Royal Guard ponies isn't enough. I bet they thought this was a strictly Dr. Who arc or something. lol
"Hmm... I see an alicorn, and some guards in gold armorer... This may just NOT be an mlp fanfiction!" Errrgg... Trying.. to... brain.............. HURTS! XD
How exactly did the first chapter not cut it? I saw nothing odd in it and to be honest this new chapter massively turned the excellent mood of the story in bad direction. I know you might not want to share it out of politeness but who said what? If staff interference caused this massive mood change then that staffer really needs to be talked to.Edit: Eh, the first chapter was edited too so never-mind. Odds are it is nothing then, just looked bad when first chapter seemed like it had sufficient pony and the comment like that on second chapter. Small comment then: I got an impression that the story was going in certain direction with spite and then second chapter changed it all, really threw me into a loop and was a bit hard to move to next chapter.