With war looming over Equestria and the fate of the world more or less in my hands, can I hold it together and sucessfully manage work, love and war? Hell if I know...
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I think you meant "severe to me" rather than "sever top me".
6776642 yes, thank you. I'll change that as soon as I'm able.
6776706 'kay. Sounds good!
Oh god yes
6776795 You... gonna be alright bud?
Fanally you put the "tickling the time bomb".
6779012 I'm not sure I understand...
I find it kind of odd that this is my first comment on this story but I must admit that your take on torture is more hammer-like in nature when in reality it must be like a scalpels gentle caress. The flaying of flesh is fine but the hydrochloric acid bit seemed a little ham-fisted. If you want real pain for a griffin in the show they apparently have teeth so you proceeded to grind them down with a dentist drill while they're still awake and when they pass out from the pain wake them up with smelling salts. Obviously you will do this on there molars so they can continue to speak coherently you don't want to destroy the eye teeth after all. To go even further is to vivisect the flesh from the bone and start getting creative by engraving the bone itself with said dentist drill which will cause unimaginable pain but keep the subject alive.
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Ideas for later, thanks!