1 human male vs. Who Knows How Many Chicks In This School! I'm not sure I'm up for this...
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dude ive read the GEA "tutorials" but still left me confused...
in the prologue its was just a letter from celestia right?.. right!, then what? is he transported to equestria somehow or is he already in equestria? why was he enrolled at GEA? also the one dark bit past of his that he served time in prison?
in this universe where humans and anthro ponies are even common or unnatural? just like in other HIE fics where protagonist is somehow transported to equestria or humans and ponies have already made contact with each other and living peacefully?
2 of 3 said "tutorials" chapters are only clop chapters it does not even have enough sense as to why he is being chased by mares... is it bcoz its estrus season? or he is the only male student in an all female school? or is there a deeper meaning behind it?..........
its way too fast paced, chapter 1 intros of characters and a bit of backstory, then chapter 2 a follow thru chapter hence a scenario relating to chapter 1 and/or making/adding a tidbit for the readers that was left from the cliff hangers in chapter 1.............
ill try to read the other chapters but for now im going to sleep it made my brain cry.......
7373381 I'll explain:
See, I have been trying to lay down more details, but I've been on a long hiatus to try, so I had to do some thinking on it since I started on it.
The story is based on my inspiration of some adventure games, and some of the clopfics I've read here. The prologue is a letter of recommendation, and the three chapters following are like an adventure game; exploring the environment, and interacting with characters, which included the mares being fascinated with a pure human male's presence, which is, like you said, a deeper meaning to it. But in the process, I had to write "class chapters" while thinking of chapters to explore the meaning of the human's presence and all that. As for the class thing and the sex tutorial from Hush Money, meeting Luna shows that despite the circumstances, the human has to try and get graded with various classes, which leads to the sex tutorial from Hush Money, because no matter what, there would be either virgins looking to have sex, hardcore mares looking to bang, etc...
Ergo, After Mojo (my character) received the letter, he is somehow teleported to the academy, and was exploring the place when various mares caught sight of the him. Then came their reactions, mostly being "horny", and either chasing or trying to get him for themselves.
After the sex tutorial from Hush Money, Mojo, never a virgin anymore, now gets the chance to show the horny mares what they're expecting, otherwise he would be boned to death as a virgin, dead and never walking again.
7373381 first, after interacting intimately with the mares, i met the principal and vice principal (Celestia and Luna), who gave Mojo the the curriculum in the first chapter. And after that came the sex tutorial in the second chapter, then came the initiation sex from Paddle City in the third. Got it?
7374454
now thats an explanation i needed!
dude you need to incorporate what you had explained to me into the story since it was never mentioned that "mojo" was sent to equestria or the fact that how he received a letter from celestia herself w/o any explanation whatsoever....
also the fact how mares were horny atleast a small explanation on the story of it aside from them being horny....
(only guys are horny w/o an explanation )
lastly its way too fast paced even for "tutorial" chapters i cant even get a thought in between whats happening in the chapters
7374506 once I get the chance, I might change the beginning chapters.
wow he really bucked a student right in front of everyone.
7375129 yup. Lol pressuring, isn't it?