So, basically this chapter summed up in a nutshell:

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And I see the whole burning down buildings thing didn't fade after canterlot after all.

Burn for the burn god? Charcoal for the Charcoal throne?!

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And thus, Stableton Falls.

Not to mention the chapter (and story in general) suffers from what's called "Wall of Text" disorder: where paragraphs are giant and clumped together making it unpleasant to read.

Call it a personal belief/preference, but In my experience a paragraph should never have more than 5 sentences at max or two very large ones (2-3 is ideal), and on top of that should always be double-spaced.

See the post-fall fic "Judgement" for what I mean.

Another exciting chapter. I can't wait to see how Paige survives and fights back :3 Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading ^^