Editing this comment because I feel my previous one was not grand eloquent enough.
I find your story idea, following the life of a mare in the resistance to be very interesting, the numerous story possabilities that come from such a set up are nearly limitless.
Your main character is likeable, and the world building is great. I enjoyed reading about the spead of the crystal heart corruption and what it looked like to ponies outside of canterlot.
Both you and this story have fantastic potential and I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
First! Also, great FoE story. can't wait for the next chapter!
It seems the premise of the story itself alone is becoming interesting here; let's see how this one turns out...
A canon resistance-based fic? I'm surprised, but also delighted ;)
Keeping an eye on this like I do the main series.
All right, let's see how this plays out.
Editing this comment because I feel my previous one was not grand eloquent enough.
I find your story idea, following the life of a mare in the resistance to be very interesting, the numerous story possabilities that come from such a set up are nearly limitless.
Your main character is likeable, and the world building is great. I enjoyed reading about the spead of the crystal heart corruption and what it looked like to ponies outside of canterlot.
Both you and this story have fantastic potential and I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
I'm jonesing for another hit of FOE canon rebellion