WHAT!?!? OH COME ON!!! You didn't leave us in a cliff hanger scenario but rainbow dash coming in and saving the day at last second is a tad clique ! But I'm still intrigued and waiting on the next and thanks for keeping me and the res of the community entertained ! We couldn't ask for more!
Dialogue could use some work, but a good chapter none the less. I hope we get a little explanation for the sudden Dash appearance. I don't object to it, I just expect reasoning for it, even though the answer may be pretty obvious being an open window and all.
752250 Don't worry, it will all be explained in the next chapter in detail. Time for Pumpkin vs. the... well, you'll see. Also, some say that the end of that chapter was a bit clique; it is, and it's just how I roll.
WHAT!?!? OH COME ON!!! You didn't leave us in a cliff hanger scenario but rainbow dash coming in and saving the day at last second is a tad clique ! But I'm still intrigued and waiting on the next and thanks for keeping me and the res of the community entertained ! We couldn't ask for more!
Dialogue could use some work, but a good chapter none the less. I hope we get a little explanation for the sudden Dash appearance. I don't object to it, I just expect reasoning for it, even though the answer may be pretty obvious being an open window and all.
Also, Twilight: "I totally got this"
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Don't worry, it will all be explained in the next chapter in detail. Time for Pumpkin vs. the... well, you'll see.
Also, some say that the end of that chapter was a bit clique; it is, and it's just how I roll.
Well, I'm convinced. Pumpkin is the MLP version of Broly, just give her time and she will go around yelling "PINKIE!!!" while blowing crap up.