Hmm, so is Discord going to change the rest of the mane six like that? Rainbow Dash into a griffon, Applejack into a timberwolf, Twilight into a changeling? Or something like that, I dunno

6590546 Nah, needs to be something else for dash, something that cant fly to truly get revenge

nice to see an update

sorry to say the next chapter will be a while. I'm having trouble on what to transform the rest in to, I have some general ideas but nothing set in stone. Im trying to turn them all in to animals or creatures of some kind, but im having trouble with RD and AJ. Fluttershy and twilght i know what im going to do to them but thats not till near the end

6593595 Please don't make Fluttershy a tree, it wouldn't really be revenge and it'd just be kinda played out and stupid.

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Rainbow dash should either be a turtle or a flightless bird, like a chicken. Something that can't fly for sure.

Are you going to do anyone else besides the mane 6? Like the CMC or spike?

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I agree on the flightless thing and have considered a chicken as an option but couldnt write it out well.

I have consider going after others after the mane 6, right now i going for shining and his wife after, I might do more if i can think of something good for each one.

right now though im stuck on what to do with pinkie pie

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Parasprite maybe? I could also see hers being something fat, like maybe a hippo.

If you go the inanimate route, dildo or love doll would be perfect for an orgy scene. To put a twist on her love of parties.

Good luck, I can't wait to see more.

What's happening with this story. Are you going to keep writing, or is this going to be it. I, (and probably a lot of other people) would like you to keep this fic. Keep going man :D

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im working on it, but my problem is i start to write version dont like it and re write it, ive done the next ch three times cause i coulnt get tf to write well or i didnt like how it came out

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Would it help if I offered to help with editing and proof reading? Assuming you're still looking for an editor.

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help would very welcome thank you, once i get the chapter written a proof reader and editor would be a great help

where is chapter 3?

What the shit did I just read it nasty but so cool keep it up hope at the end its just a nightmare.

Please make twilight into discords new mate that would be funny.

Is Lady a diamond poodle?