story 2, wooo, super excited about this one. i'm planning on doing something for all mane but i cant think of anything for fluttershy and pinkie so ideas are welcome

Interesting so far.

More I say, more!

is there anymore transformation beside farm animals?

6413859
I'm planning on transform them into various from monsters to other species

6414243 ok...what kind of monster or other species?

First off, you need an editor really badly.

Second, when two people are talking you can't have them in the same paragraph with the other.

Also you missing a lot of grammar everywhere.

Unless you fix your story, more people are going to downvote it.

I like the premise, but there's quite a lot of grammer grammer mistakes in it. But that shouldn't be too bad, just try to get an editor. Still, I hope you continue. And have you thought about adding some inanimate transformations? It seems like something Discord would enjoy doing, turning ponies into objects that are still sentient, but are completely at his mercy.

6416678

I'm currently looking for an editor, as for the inanimate tf. I've thought about it but cant think of anything good, but there's alot i havent deiced on you yet like what to do with, RD, Pinkie, and Fluttershy so who knows

6427685 How about turning Fluttershy into a tree? Would't that be pretty ironic?

are you going to continue or what?

Why would Discord need the alicorn amulet when he's already basically omnipotent? He's already shown to be capable of overpowering any and all the princesses so why does he need even more power just to transform them, which he never really had a problem with in the first place.

When is the next chapter comming out?

i like where this is going. new chapter please?

Do you need an editor/proof reader?
I have skype and kik.