He had it good, for what it was. No one left to tell him what to do, or how to do it. Left behind after his species changed direction, he finds solitude his greatest benefactor. That is, until something still running afraid passes over his home.
Seems like this will be a good story. I'm going to guess that this virus is kinda like zombies? (Not sure if you wrote that somewhere, but if you did I probably missed it.) But yeah, story followed!
6413086 The virus is going to pay a bit of homage to the Krippin Virus from I am Legend movie adaption. Great premise, just somewhat underutilized which has given me some wiggle room. I hope to have some good fun with it, but lacking the tragedy and gore tags I've set the line to just how far I can/will take it.
6413612 Glad you're enjoying the story. Always trying to improve and enjoy feedback to let me know how things are going. Thank you for reading!
6414949 That was something of an experiment for me to try and not pull the reader out of immersion. I do plan to go back and see if i can accomplish that without confusing the reader, which defeats the purpose. Thank you for the feedback and giving the story your compliments!
Seems like this will be a good story.
I'm going to guess that this virus is kinda like zombies? (Not sure if you wrote that somewhere, but if you did I probably missed it.)
But yeah, story followed!
6413086 The virus is going to pay a bit of homage to the Krippin Virus from I am Legend movie adaption. Great premise, just somewhat underutilized which has given me some wiggle room. I hope to have some good fun with it, but lacking the tragedy and gore tags I've set the line to just how far I can/will take it.
Kinda confusing, but digging the I Am Lgend vibe. Staying tuned
The perspective shifts got a little confusing at times, but it's really good so far. You've earned a like and I'll be following this.
6413612 Glad you're enjoying the story. Always trying to improve and enjoy feedback to let me know how things are going. Thank you for reading!
6414949 That was something of an experiment for me to try and not pull the reader out of immersion. I do plan to go back and see if i can accomplish that without confusing the reader, which defeats the purpose. Thank you for the feedback and giving the story your compliments!
Even just an extra linebreak would make the scene transitions clearer
It's not bad, but boy it's pretty hard to follow. I thought it was twilight who was in his house at first.