Interesting. I'm liking the story so far, but it does seem a tad bit rushed.everything else is fine and you have made me laugh...ALOT! Also... LEEEEEEEEROOOOOOOOY MUTHA FUCKIN JEEEEEEEENKIIIIIINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think we know were spartans come from i wonder what happens when covies and humans meet what i find odd is that they have ships in orbit isnt the tech good enought to spot each others ships by now?
Agreed. I'm a bit worried what will happen when the two sides meet. I like to believe that Celestia and Luna will interfere and force to the two sides into a truce and force them to learn to get along, as the two Princesses would want to keep Equestria a neutral site.
That's just my opinion on the matter, because I hate to see ponies split up and take sides.
I'm a bit worried what will happen when the two sides meet. I like to believe that Celestia and Luna will interfere and force to the two sides into a truce and force them to learn to get along, as the two Princesses would want to keep Equestria a neutral site.
That's just my opinion on the matter, because I hate to see ponies split up and take sides.
Anyways, I really like that you added Leroy Jenkins to the story. I would LOVE to hear his battle cry sometime during the story. That would be EPIC!
"I bet the Royal Guards are better." At that moment, MC slammed into the ground next to Twilight's house and beat the shit out of 10 Royal Guards using only his face.
I remember star wars the old republic and Wow with leory scremin his name going full on a raid boss on his own without the other members. so fucking hilarious.
This kind of writing with all the sexual tension really grinds my gears anyway, but knowing that there will never be any payoff makes it that much worse. I am having a mental breakdown of internal screaming and external stress'ed giggling LOL
Interesting. I'm liking the story so far, but it does seem a tad bit rushed.everything else is fine and you have made me laugh...ALOT! Also... LEEEEEEEEROOOOOOOOY MUTHA FUCKIN JEEEEEEEENKIIIIIINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think we know were spartans come from i wonder what happens when covies and humans meet
what i find odd is that they have ships in orbit isnt the tech good enought to spot each others ships by now?
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Agreed. I'm a bit worried what will happen when the two sides meet.
I like to believe that Celestia and Luna will interfere and force to the two sides into a truce and force them to learn to get along, as the two Princesses would want to keep Equestria a neutral site.
That's just my opinion on the matter, because I hate to see ponies split up and take sides.
I'm a bit worried what will happen when the two sides meet.
I like to believe that Celestia and Luna will interfere and force to the two sides into a truce and force them to learn to get along, as the two Princesses would want to keep Equestria a neutral site.
That's just my opinion on the matter, because I hate to see ponies split up and take sides.
Anyways, I really like that you added Leroy Jenkins to the story.
I would LOVE to hear his battle cry sometime during the story. That would be EPIC!
"I bet the Royal Guards are better." At that moment, MC slammed into the ground next to Twilight's house and beat the shit out of 10 Royal Guards using only his face.
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Is it wrong that I thought the exact same thing?
Private Leroy Jenkins
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I remember star wars the old republic and Wow with leory scremin his name going full on a raid boss on his own without the other members. so fucking hilarious.
oh women aren't allowed to be in same sex marriages in the covenent
I THOUGHT THIS WAS MURICA
This kind of writing with all the sexual tension really grinds my gears anyway, but knowing that there will never be any payoff makes it that much worse. I am having a mental breakdown of internal screaming and external stress'ed giggling LOL
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