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Interesting beginning.
Few notes on spelling and grammar: If there's a pause in speech, there needs to be a comma "," at the end. (e.g. "I'm Fred," he said.)
Also, it's confusing and incorrect to have multiple people speaking in the same line. To improve readability, it should be written as
"<sentence>," person 1 asked.
"<Sentence>," person 2 replied
As I began, I'd like to see where the story's headed.
very intersting however i dont think the person heading a UNSC ship is calleda ship master i think they are called a captain just a mistake i wanted to point out to u on the Covenant side however the captain of the ship is calleda ship master
Love it. Eagerly waiting for more.
"What kind of religious species would be hostile?" ... yep Celestia has won the award for Idiot of the Year.
its a good premise but the elites don't have the covenant anymore plus they just want peace now. No more absorbiton of species to their religion sorry to burst your bubble
Sending a message in which you say that you're a god sounds a bit cocky.
Don't 'cha think?
654191 Didn't you read the headers? This story takes place in 2531, long before the Sangheili split from the Covenant.
I can't wait to see what happens when the humans show up. Especially since I doubt they will be as friendly and accepting of aliens and Celestia's claims of godhood as Thar was. The ponies might even believe the humans are the evil aliens.
655276 woops for some reason I was thinking 30 years after the war not during
Good story, but it seems a little bit rushed. With the commander saying "abduct the ponies" then 5 minutes later "release the ponies", It seems . . . choppy and rushed.
Nice story update?
awsome i love the hal reeerences i bit of a halo fantic myself
659578 Yeah this was the first story I ever wrote for these two universes and the first one I ever posted on the internet, so it is a bit rushed. I'm trying to make additions as I post chapters to flesh it out a little.
660013 If I may make a suggestion? Maybe the Marines who abducted Twilight were going against the order "observe, not interfere". The captain could make a show of berating the troops in front of Celestia when they return.
Interesting. I'm liking the story so far, but it does seem a tad bit rushed.everything else is fine and you have made me laugh...ALOT!
Also... LEEEEEEEEROOOOOOOOY MUTHA FUCKIN JEEEEEEEENKIIIIIINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think we know were spartans come from i wonder what happens when covies and humans meet
what i find odd is that they have ships in orbit isnt the tech good enought to spot each others ships by now?
661574
Agreed. I'm a bit worried what will happen when the two sides meet.
I like to believe that Celestia and Luna will interfere and force to the two sides into a truce and force them to learn to get along, as the two Princesses would want to keep Equestria a neutral site.
That's just my opinion on the matter, because I hate to see ponies split up and take sides.
I'm a bit worried what will happen when the two sides meet.
I like to believe that Celestia and Luna will interfere and force to the two sides into a truce and force them to learn to get along, as the two Princesses would want to keep Equestria a neutral site.
That's just my opinion on the matter, because I hate to see ponies split up and take sides.
Anyways, I really like that you added Leroy Jenkins to the story.
I would LOVE to hear his battle cry sometime during the story. That would be EPIC!
great now when will the new chapter be out?
666389 Chapter 6 will probably come around sometime tonight.
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yay i like it but why was there only a hundred and twenty-one Marines, three Spartan-IIs, six M12 LRV Warthogs and one M808B Scorpion Main Battle Tank from a destroyer? shouldnt there be more? ora re the rest in teh destroyer?.
667157 Read the chapter again. The Marathon got shot down before everything could be offloaded.
Something told me there be character death in this story.
I just hope Rainbow Dash and Twilight survive.
R.I.P. Fluttershy.
667186 well shit i didnt see that
Mane 6 died
Sorry but Im abandoning this story. It is well written and deserves a thumb but Im unfaving it
Good luck with the story any way
See ya
668600 You're gonna leave the story because one of the Mane 6 was killed?
Ooooooook.
Also it's not necessary to tell me you're going to unfave. I don't give a shit if you unfave. If you don't like my shit then don't say anything and just get out.
670377 The drama and anguish for Fluttershy will be coming soon, don't you worry.
670474 I didn't make her use The Stare because I hate The Stare, it's absolutely fucking stupid.
HOW COULD YOU FUCKING KILL LYRA AND BON-BON YOU FUCKING FA... Oh never mind...
671863
I could only assume not
673932 Lulz!
yeah spartans
I honestly don't care which characters get killed, it feels more like playing the game (or cut scenes, actually) then like a fanfic. I like it.
Fluttershys dead Pinkey PIe is dead Applejack has here leg cutoff
whats going top happen to Rainbow Dash Rarity and Twlight Sparkle
FIRST POST!!!!!
676747 I guess you'll have to wait and see.
how could you kill pinkie... YOU MONSTER
676800 Lulz!
676800
Honestly, it had to happen sooner or later.
677237 Pinkie Sense just didn't happen this time, alright?
Also it sounds like a plan. Just don't be an idiot about the rage and say stupid shit like "I unfaved" or whatever.
WHY?!?!?
681243 Why not?
681659
Touche
i always wondered why the elite didnt stab applejack, just end it quicker for her. but if u want to make them suffer, its fine with me
684917 Net necessarily true. In Halo: The fall of Reach, Spartan-117 mentions how he and the other Spartans of blue team watched from orbit as hundreds of civilians were herded together and ripped apart by Jackals AND Grunts on the planet Jericho VII.
Yay
Somehow the music went to the last 30 seconds when everyone was dying
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GODDAMM SIR YOU DESERVE A SALUTE
"I bet the Royal Guards are better." At that moment, MC slammed into the ground next to Twilight's house and beat the shit out of 10 Royal Guards using only his face.