Pinkie Pie walked through the halls of Canterlot High, as she would any other day. The Battle of the Bands was over, and all was well. In fact, the once-evil Sirens now went to the school, after their pendants had been shattered.
This is exactly what Pinkie was thinking about and came to an abrupt stop. She still hadn't thrown them a Welcome to Canterlot High party for the Dazzlings yet, which she did for every new student.
Well, then I just found out what I'm going to do today, she thought to herself, just as the bell rang. Right after class. And so she scrambled to the science room.
Adagio passed a group of girls in a corner chatting on her way to her locker. Out of the corner of her eye she saw one point at her, whisper to her friends, and the group cleared out. As did everyone else in the hallway.
Adagio let out a small annoyed growl, finding herself alone once again. She entered her locker combination and a small piece of paper floated to the ground when she got it open.
"Ugh. Not another one." she groaned as she knelt down to pick it up. But to her surprise, the note wasn't a rude comment like it usually was. It read:
Dear Adagio,
Please meet me in the band room RIGHT NOW!
-Unknown
Adagio shrugged. "I have nothing better to do." She closed her locker and then headed to the band room.
Once science was over, Pinkie finally had the chance to set up a party for the first person on her list, Adagio. She hurried down to the band room, with a wagon filled with party supplies in tow. Don't ask me where she got them...
As she passed Adagio's locker, she slid a note into it. Hopefully she'd finish setting up before she found it.
Pinkie finally reached the room for the party and dug through her wagon, but then frowned. She'd left her party cannon behind.
I knew I was forgetting something! She sighed. Oh, well. Guess we're gonna have to do this the old-fashioned way. She glanced at her watch. Doing this in ten minutes would be difficult, but come on, we're talking about Pinkie Pie here!
Ten Minutes Later
Adagio opened the door to the band room.
"Surprise!!" Pinkie jumped up from behind a drum set, making the guest of honor jump.
"Ahh! Oh, it's you." Adagio rolled her eyes.
"Don't you like it? It's a party just for you!"
Adagio read the banner that hung above them. 'Welcome to Canterlot High!' "Aren't you a little late?"
"I know, I know. But better late then never, right?" Pinkie shrugged. "Anyway...I was also wondering...I'm friends with everyone in the school except you and your, um, trio? So, wanna be friends?"
Adagio considered this. She'd really only ever been friends with Aria and Sonata. And everyone always avoided her (she didn't blame them), and also, why not? Maybe it'd be a good change. "Um, sure..."
"...Pinkie Pie." Pinkie beamed. Adagio nodded. "So, wanna come par-tay?"
And so everyone was happy. Pinkie grinned. One down, two to go.
Let me give you a little bit of constructive criticism here. This story is interesting, but I don't think Adagio would accept Pinkie Pies friendship just like that, it just felt, I dunno, a little bit rushed. Thats all I have to say. I hope this comment helps you out.
6317198 I can agree, It felt a bit rushed. I still did enjoy it, tough.
6318942 So did I, I finished the whole story. Anyway have you checked out my very first fan fic yet. If not, give it a go and if you like it, please give it a like, I worked very hard on the first chapter, making sure everything was perfect, but the fic isn't finished yet. The first chapter is up and the story is named Hysteria. I hope you like it.
Good story, but like Midnightrun said, Adagio would not be the type to jump in on the party wagon, but instead Pinkie would have to persuade her that its gonna be fun.
Looking at this story I think it can be improved.
Firstly, I do not think you need to separate this story into 3 chapters. A single one-shot would have done better personally.
Secondly, Maybe you can make the story better by adding on more Pinkie Pie Cartoonist behaviour in this story as she prepare each party. Like she dashing off in a puff of smoke or breaking the forth wall.
Finally, you could have made the setting for each individual party different as in the theme of each party suitable for each siren.
Overall, I would say I give this story an A for effort but thanks for trying.