"Finally, lunch!" You quietly say to yourself, You were so hungry, you rushed to the school so fast, You didn't have time to eat any breakfast. As you march to the cafeteria, You notice the blue girl you bumped into earlier, She was sitting nearby a table, Talking to two other girls, a Orange haired girl, and a Purple haired one.
You take you're lunch, which was a sandwich, with milk, and walk up to her, You didn't want to talk to her, when she was with her friends, So you sit by a table, nearby them. You sit down and take a bite from you're sandwich. Wondering about what they are talking about. As you try to lean in closer, You suddenly hear a bit of they're talk.
"Alright, Sonata." Said the Orange haired one. "Me and Aria have to go to the bathroom, Don't go Anywhere!"
As She said that, She walked away with Aria to the bathroom. This was finally you're chance to talk to her.
"Hi there!" You said, as you sat by their table. "You remember me, right?"
She didn't repsong for a second, she started at you before saying anything. "Ooh, Yeah! I do!"
"I'm the person who bumped into you." You Said. "I'm Tom, by the way."
"Oh, Hi Tom!" She said cheerfully. "I'm Sonata, Sonata Dusk!"
"Nice to meet you too Sonata."
"Yay! Thanks."
"So, Who were those two?"
"Oh, my Team mates, Adagio and Aria."
"Alright."
"So-"
"Um- Oh, right! I'm new here."
"Oh, Okay then."
"Yeah..."
"Well, Bye then."
"Yeah, Ha, Bye."
After that small awkward moment, you Slowly walk away from her table, and sat down on the table you were at earlier, and finished you're sandwich. After a while, Adagio and Aria returned.
"C'mon, Sonata!" Said Adagio, and walked away with Aria and Sonata.
You sigh, and walk to you're next class.
I never noticed he actually sat down at her table, and well very short again, otherwise not bad i guess, however i don´t want to vote yet, i wait what happens next.
6266097 Alright, Thank you for the advice. This is my first story, and English is not my first language, But again, Thank you.
6266913 okay then i understand it a little bit more, i knew it was better not to vote to soon, i don´t like it to give a soon vote if someone is new and didn´t had enough time to show what they can do.
However i think i want to give you a thumb up now.
I don´t want to sound like i would be just stubborn, but i think it really make it already look much better if you make the story......1500-2000 words at least, that just gives you more room to let them talk a bit, develop a friendship, and become boyfriend, and girlfriend.