To Spike's confusion, he wakes one day to find Twilight and her friends have become busty bimbo athletes who get together and make a camp to train more bimbo athletes. Armed with only his wits, can he find a way to cure them and save the day?
"That's a shame," Fluttershy said. "But I guess if you don't want to, I'll have to go and get one of the other girls to do it..." "O-other girls?" Cheerilee was afraid to ask, but she did so anyway. "Oh, yes," Fluttershy said, crouching down near Cheerilee. "Those delightful Cutie Mark Crusaders. Tell me, Cheerilee, which do you think would prefer breast milk better? Sweetie Belle, or Scootaloo?"
This part was dark, specially considering AJ is actually helping.
Rarity watched Spike go, her eyes tracking his movement, occasionally glancing at his equipment. "Mmm..." She couldn't wait to suck out another load and steal his vitality from him again.
Yeah, I remember when I was planning that I wanted a moment that actually showed, "hey, wait, this is actually a serious problem."
Granted, I wanted that to be the moment everyone else realized Spike was right and they needed to do something. and more importantly it being less... easy, I guess, with it more being of Cheerilee doing an active heroic sacrifice, letting herself be corrupted so the others could get away instead of just... kinda standing there and letting it happen.
Reasonably sure. It should just be that one moment.
As opposed to say something like ... oh, Mistress Adagio, where the entire thing is Sunset slowly becoming corrupted and bent to Adagio's will and powerless to stop it.
"Well, well, well!" Snails drawled, sticking himself out the window. "Not so high and mighty now, are you, Spike?" Snails crossed his arms.
Oh fuck off Snails, you didn't even try to resist.
"NO!" Sweetie Belle began to slap him around the head and shoulders. Scootaloo and Apple Bloom rushed in to try and stop her. "How - could you - have sex - with - my sister, you - dirty, rotten - perverted piece of filth!"
Okay, Sweetie is pissed. When this is all over I hope that Spike and Sweetie will still be friends. 7704346
Rarity watched Spike go, her eyes tracking his movement, occasionally glancing at his equipment. "Mmm..." She couldn't wait to suck out another load and steal his vitality from him again.
Nope. Nothing suspicious here
Yeah, I also noticed this bit, seems things are getting real now huh? It's funny, Spike is concerned with taking advantage of Rarity, but really it's Rarity taking advantage of Spike. When this is over, there is going to be one heck of an awkward conversation between these two.
"Mmm... say, why isn't Applejack a cowgirl? She fits the theme better than I do."
Spike couldn't deny one thing; their costumes were alluring. Sunset Shimmer wore a cheerleader outfit like the... ...and Pinkie Pie in a ballet dancer outfit. Applejack was in cowgirl garb...
Rarity grinned at him. She sat up and held up a length of rubber hose in one hand and a golf ball in the other...
Rarity moved the rubber hose and tossed it over the arm of the couch. She turned her head and spat the billiard ball into her hand...
Tsk tsk tsk... Citrus, Citrus, Citrus... you would not be able to hold up at all in an interrogation, would you? Talk about inconsistency issues...
"Oh, yes," Fluttershy said, crouching down near Cheerilee. "Those delightful Cutie Mark Crusaders. Tell me, Cheerilee, which do you think would prefer breast milk better? Sweetie Belle, or Scootaloo?"
Clever girl. (If you get that reference, than congratulations.)
This part was dark, specially considering AJ is actually helping.
Nope. Nothing suspicious here
Uh oh... snips snails.. your inability to say no and be anything but diplorable may have ruined everything..
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Yeah, I remember when I was planning that I wanted a moment that actually showed, "hey, wait, this is actually a serious problem."
Granted, I wanted that to be the moment everyone else realized Spike was right and they needed to do something. and more importantly it being less... easy, I guess, with it more being of Cheerilee doing an active heroic sacrifice, letting herself be corrupted so the others could get away instead of just... kinda standing there and letting it happen.
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Are you sure you shouldn´t be adding a "Dark" tag?
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Reasonably sure. It should just be that one moment.
As opposed to say something like ... oh, Mistress Adagio, where the entire thing is Sunset slowly becoming corrupted and bent to Adagio's will and powerless to stop it.
That's not sex, VP Luna. It's more like a blowjob
Oh fuck off Snails, you didn't even try to resist.
Okay, Sweetie is pissed. When this is all over I hope that Spike and Sweetie will still be friends.
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Yeah, I also noticed this bit, seems things are getting real now huh? It's funny, Spike is concerned with taking advantage of Rarity, but really it's Rarity taking advantage of Spike. When this is over, there is going to be one heck of an awkward conversation between these two.
7704634 are we going to see trixie and starlight into sport bimbo:$
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No.
No.
I do rather like seeing someone try to resist and fail. Wonder how many more times that'll happen...
Snips and Snails better STAY AWAY FROM MY SUNSET OR ELSE I’LL BURY THEM ALIVE!!!!!!!
Tsk tsk tsk... Citrus, Citrus, Citrus... you would not be able to hold up at all in an interrogation, would you? Talk about inconsistency issues...
Clever girl. (If you get that reference, than congratulations.)