"Come on Mark, you need to breath. Deep breaths."

Should be "breathe."

but I just didn't feel contempt with my walk

I think you mean "content."

It all is seems so ridiculous

Extraneous "is."

how it came about is humerus.

I believe you want "humorous."

But other than that, pretty good so far.

Oh,you lousy FUCKER! "luv" is something a retard would say. Were you dropped as a baby?

6177469 No, it is something a brit would say. Or anyone who developed the quirk.