Just for future ref, new paragraph when another person speaks. huge blocks of words like in here

She introduces you to a small white bunny "This is Angel he's my pet bunny."
"He's cute" you tell her as she puts her supplies onto a table. The two of you then start feeding and taking care of several injured animals. As you're wrapping up a squirrel's injured leg you notice Fluttershy standing next to you. She eases closer to you as you continue caring for the squirrel. You finish wrapping the squirrel's leg. You take a deep breath with your eyes closed and say "Fluttershy, I was wondering if you would like to go on a date with me." Your heart beats faster and your mind tells you you asked her to soon.
"That would be wonderful" she tells you with a big smile
"How about tomorrow?" You ask
"Okay" she says hovering a bit above the ground covering her smile with her front hooves.
"I'm still not sure what there all is to do here in Ponyville, what would you like to do?" you ask
"Oh, uhm you could meet me here for tea at lunch and we could go from there." She tells you happily.
"That sounds great, I didn't realize how late it was I should go, good bye, I had a lot of fun today." You tell her noticing the setting sun.
"Goodbye," she says "I'll see you tomorrow"

That's unacceptable. You should fix it if you get a chance to.