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'A few minutes later, a muffled explosion shook the building, shaking dust free from everywhere, and a much louder bang indicated the door had fallen free.' You know, not to poke holes here, but I'm pretty sure plastic explosives make more of a bang than any door would. x3
A room full of fancy buck snack cakes... and not a damn Twinkie in sight. A damn shame. Still, I bet the could make some money selling the cache to some ghoul out there!
A fairly simple chapter, but there's nothing wrong with that! It's nice to read a story with just two characters again, keeps it simple to follow, even with the POV switch. Anyway, I'll say this, I'm curious to know what was so needed out of Stable 60 that a bunch of Alicorns would need!
Oh that POV change was unexpected but I liked it, interesting to see things from Dashie’s perspective. I had a bit of trouble following along with how fast paced it was, but perhaps that’s just me. Just felt like a whole lot of information at the end and a bit clumsy on the transitions. Perhaps line breaks would have worked better instead of a quick paragraph, but that could also just be a stylistic difference too. Simply felt too quick of getting to places though it’s also important not to tarry too long especially if nothing is really happening. On the whole tho I liked the chapter! I’m curious what’s up with Stable 60 and these ‘rogue alicorns’ - and a Zony in the Stable is cool! Tho I’m curious as to the why he’d speak in rhymes given that’s a cultural thing and he’d have been raised with the rest of the Stable population. Either way though our heroes are off to Baltimare- exciting!
(And was that a reference to PH with the lightning to the Pip-Buck?)
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Tallahassee approves of your mentality and disapproves of the lack of Twinkies.
it was certainly nice that we could still learn what was going on without blacking out with Firefly and learning what happened in a recap so i'd say that was a good thing. and, yes, some people do still use the "thing" thing, though, to be fair, alot of the sayings from my childhood aren't a thing anymore. my coworker was confused when i said they were "on the ball". how that stopped being a thing, i don't know. i hope that "you da bomb/man" is still a thing but my family earned its extreme paranoia so i'm not getting my hopes up.