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StSc15 is live!
Finally.
Just in time for StSc's second anniversary, too!
A lot of arcane sciences ponies died. That sucks.
Fuck yeah, this was well played my dude. I know you've been experimenting with perspective swaps, and I kind of hoped this is what you were leading up to. Gotta say, you nailed it. This is the perfect example of how to use multi-perspective to show a complex situation. 10/10 unicorn-induced stoppage. Liked the inclusion of a triage scene, was quite done. Completely in-character mistakes like the checkpoint door and some of the niceties of triage make me smile.
Also I love Pumpkin Blitz' characterization the last couple chapters. I know some of the themes you're going for, and she's a great example of just about all of them.
The threat, such as it was, came from a weird direction - but there was a great transition from surprised to reacting to retaliating.
I think this story well and truly showed its, and your, strengths this chapter, and I am really excited for more.