I'm jarred from my memories by a train whistle and the conductor was looking for passengers, whilst saying, "All aboard the last train to Ponyville! I repeat, last train to Ponyville till morning!"
Moving quickly, I snag myself under the train, to stick myself there. As the train rolls out of the city at a stedy pace, I watch the scenery roll by. The train is too loud, for my mind to drift into memory again. So, I just start to wonder things I didn't when I was a stone ornament. Did the merchant trick others into this? If so is there a way of contacting them? Well I do have that one machine I made that can open a tiny hole in space time. The hole can fit something the size of a cell to go through, might as well throw my brother's cell after I glue a my emblem on it, in there with a message recorded in case some other being in the multiverse finds it maybe Superman, Batman. I'm smiling from this thought since it would be funny. Though there is a chance Doom, Iron Man, universe forbid the real spider man finds my sorry message. Then he figures a way to find me and kick my ass for this. Well. That is a risk might as well take it. Though it would really suck to get beat up by my faorite hero.
During my thinking the train starts to go down a hill. Due to this I adjust my placement of my hands to better take the g force. Smirking since this universe might have its own Stan Lee cameos, if that is true then I will have to keep an eye out of the pony Stan Lee aka King of Cameos. Looking over I see Everfree. Knowing I was close to my destination, I climb onto the side of the train. After getting to the side of the the train, I jump off to then web sling from tree branch to branch heading to the Castle of the Two Sisters.
Once I arrive in the castle by crashing thru the window like a boss. I start to the basement, since that is where all my stuff is at. Once arriving down there I pull out my brothers cell phone and my copy of my spider emblem and web sticks the emblem to the phone. Then I turn on the voice recorder and say mostly joking, but a part of me is taking this seriously, "...Hi listener I'm Jeffery the Spider man. If you need a friend, some help in a fight, just someone to talk to, hell a person to relate to use on speed dial 1 and I might pick up...ok where is off button on this...ah there." I then set the message to be the thing that plays when the phone is unlocked. I walk over to my rift maker and turn my machine on and wait of the magic to open the rift in space time. Once the rift opens I throw the phone into the rift and smile as I close it as not to let anything in that might be floating out there.
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During Discord's Rain...
Discord's making rain, Discord's making rain, Discord's making RAIN!
But wait... he still made rain after 1000 years... you got me confused.
I'm terrible at spelling and correct them, but damn, not as bad as you. No offence. It is an okay story, once I figure out what you meant. For example I'll correct a paragraph or improve them a bit to the best I can. This either being correcting spelling or grammar mistakes or making needed changes. And this means, I would remove this word/(or part).
I'm jarred from my memories by a train whistle. And the conductor was looking for passengers, whilst saying[/b] "All aboard the last train to Ponyville! I repeat, last train to Ponyville till morning!"
Moving quickly, I snag myself under the train, to stick myself there. As the train rolls out of the city at a steady pace. I watch the scenery roll by. The train is too loud, for my mind to drift off into memory again. So I just started to wonder, things I didn't when I was a stone ornament. Did the merchant trick others into this? If so, is there a way of contacting them? Well, I do have that one machine I made, that can open a tiny rift in space & time. To which, the hole it self is only just big enough for something the size of a cell to go through. Might as well throw my brother's cell phone, after I glue my emblem on it. I also recorded an audio message, in case some other being in the multiverse finds it .... Maybe Superman And/(or)Batman. I'm smiling from this thought,since it would be funny. Though there is a chance of doom. That it will end up in Iron Man's Universe. Or worse, the real Spiderman finding my sorry message. Then he figures a way to find me and kick my sorry ass for this. Well, that is a risk I'm willing to take it."Even if I'm a bit reluctant to do so. Because who wants their asses kicked, by one of their favourite comic heroes" I think to myself.
Like I said before, I know where near perfect, but. I think you would agree that is a lot better, and more interesting then previous. I'm not doing this to be mean. But to help you and give you a helping hand.
Might read later.